2008年1月30日水曜日

WEI

Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview


Reviews, Posts, and Words






















































Months


08


09


10


11


12


01


Totals


Book reviews



0


1


4


5


4


4


18

Blog posts



13


15


15


11


23


15


92

Words


300

391

2215

2592

1599

747

7844

TOTAL


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1.0. Movie Reviews





















































1.1. Showcase


[+ links]


Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)




W


Notes


Toy Story


07.10.20


5

627
I think this review was good, but I was late for dead line, so I lament that.



Kill Bill


07.10.24


5

610
I think it was good.



Romeo and Juliet


07.11.06


4

491
Ihe movie was sad story.



Mrs Doubtfire


07.11.15


2

410
I laughed!!



School of Rock/Forrest Gump


07.11.30


5

779
I could write the longest sentence.



Lilo & Stich/Shrek


07.12.04

3

292
It was interesting.



Totals


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24

3209

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Key:


¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length


W: number of words


1.2. Best Movie Review


Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.



  • All movies were very interesting, but I think movie review of “School of Rock” was the best, because I could write the longest sentences and it has many paragraphs.

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2.0. Comments
























Total number of comments (use dashboard)


Months


08


09


10


11


12


01


Total





1


1


1


3


0


4


10








































Most comments on:


Titles of posts with link


Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)


Qualities of comments*[*]


Any one of your movie reviews


School of Rock


08.01.30


very good


When did you respond to those comments?


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08.01.30


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How did you respond to those comments?


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on her blog


Any of your other posts*


MR. SMALL


07.11.14


very good


When did you respond to those comments?


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07.11.14


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How did you respond to those comments?


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on their blog


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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.


Recent comments display


Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?



  • Yes, there is in a sidebar.

Additional reflections on comments



  • I think I could comment more, so I regret it a little.

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3.0. Book Reviews
















































































































































Short titles
with links


Dates (yy.mm.dd)


Words


Comments


Example:


Vampire Killer


07.05.16


39


1


2-01



LITTLE MISS NAUGHTY



07.09.28


167


0


2-02



A LITTLE PRINCESS



07.10.05


73


0


2-03



DUKE'S SON



07.10.16


146


0


2-04



The Adventures of TOM SAWYER



07.10.19


147


0


2-05



MR. HAPPY



07.10.29


74


0


2-06


LITTLE MISS TWINS


07.11.05


55


0


2-07


MR. SMALL


07.11.13


104


2


2-08


SCOOBY-DOO! and the HOWLING WOLFMAN


07.11.15


46


0


2-09


SCOOBY-DOO! and the VAMPIRE'S REVENGHE


07.11.25


27


0


2-10


SCOOBY-DOO! and the SNOW MONSTER


07.11.29


38


0


2-11


SCOOBY-DOO! and the ZOMBIE'S TREASURE


07.12.05


52


0


2-12


SCOOBY-DOO! and the SUNKEN SHIP


07.12.12


43


0


2-13


BECKHAM


07.12.20


140


0


2-14


ENGLAND


07.12.27


105


0


2-15


LONDON


08.01.07


105


0


2-16


THE WRONG TROUSERS


08.01.10


72


0


2-17


The Phantom of the Opera


08.01.18


60


0


2-18


MARY QUEEN OF SCOTS


08.01.28


113


0






















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TOTALS:


1567


2


Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).


4.2. Best Book Review


Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.



  • I think "LITTLE MISS NAUGHTY" is the best, because I like the story. In addition, I think I could write that people who see this review wants to read the book!!

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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing



  • I think I could write more and each sentences are short a little.

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6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors



  • I think the blog regularly renew.

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2008年1月28日月曜日

Book Review2- 18


MARY QUEEN OF SCOTS

While a messenger of the execution from Queen Elizabeth is afraid that it come, this story is worse in a letter form of Scottish Queen Mary who is going to tell the truth to her son. And she hands the letter to King James of her son and Beth of the lady's maid is going to tell the last execution scene and it over.
I'm so usually not interested in stories about history, but I think that I may have really read this book.
I think that it was a thing valuable at all for me to have understood the Scottish history and a religious background in simple English.

"kotobuki"



She is my thacher of English when I was junior high school student. I'm indebted to her I like English.
He is one of my old classmate. Looking at his back of the head, there is the Chinese character of "kotobuki". It means auspiciousness. The Chinese character is made of his hair!!

Alumni association



We held the alumni association after the ceremony of comong of age. I hadn't seen my old teachers for a long time, so I was very glad to see them☻ I belonged to volleyball club when I was junior high school student. He is a staff adviser to the club.

2008年1月22日火曜日

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This is "koinoki-sandou". On the road are lined with pottery of heart shape. It looks very pretty♥

Koiniki



I went to "koinoki-shrine" with my friend. It located chikugo in Fukuoka. I drew a fortune slip♡

2008年1月20日日曜日

2008年1月18日金曜日

Book Review2- 17


The Phantom of the Opera

I heard this title well, but I know this story for the first time. As for the contents of this book, it was interesting, but it was hard to read a little because I didn't know how to read person's name and title was difficult for me. I think this original story is more longer.

♡cake♡


My boy friend brought this cake before he go to his work. I was very glad because I have a sweet tooth!! I ate two piece of cake♥

2008年1月17日木曜日

Coming of Age Day


Last Saturday, I took the ceremony of coming of age at last. I wore black furisode. I met a lot of old friends and I took many pictures with them. I was very glad.
The ceremny was wonderful☺ I especially enjoyed video letters of my teachers. I had a fantastic day♬

Nail


I like nail art, so I made nail chips for my ceremony of coming of age.

2008年1月10日木曜日

Book Review2- 16


THE WRONG TROUSERS

It is the story about Wallace and Gromit. Wallace gives Gromit a pair of techno trousers as a present. It is to take Gromit for walks, but when the penguin comes to stay, he uses them for something different.
This penguin is a bad man but looks very cute!
I had ever seen this character's picture, but I knew the story for the first time. This book was interesting♫

shrine















I went to sansha-mairi with my family. I hadn't went out all my family, so I was glad. After that, we ate broiled ell as a lunch. It was very nice☻

Rainbow


I saw the rainbow!! It was very delicate, but it was very beautiful♬

2008年1月9日水曜日

memories3





These dinosaur was made by some students. These were very wonderful!! Those are displaied when takumasai was held and those are made by soushoku people every year on the each theme. So we can see different things every year.

2008年1月7日月曜日

Book Review2- 15


LONDON

Lots of people visit to London every year.
At its core, the ancient City of London, to which the name historically belongs, still retains its limited mediaeval boundaries; but since at least the 19th century the name "London" has also referred to the whole metropolis which has developed around it.
When I visited to London, in spite of Saturday there are a lot of people. I went to many place♬
Regent Street, one of London's many shopping streets. When I walked the street, I found UNIQLO that is the company I work part time, so I was glad and I took some pictures.

2008年1月6日日曜日

High school

I saw my friends in high school days after a long separation. I love them♡♡♡
I ate lunch with them.

2008年1月5日土曜日

osechi


I made osechi with my mother and my sister. It looks very beautiful♡ I was satisfied this work!!

2008年1月3日木曜日

♥A Happy New Year♥

In spite of winter vacation, I almost work part time every day, and I worked overtime yesterday and the day before yesterday, so I'm tired and I want to ate sweets!! Then, I ate this parfait at Joyfull♡